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Comment on Pro-Choice – What about men? by Naquil

Naquil — Thu, 01 Jan 2009 19:04:54 +0000

You are SO on point,I’ve been putin this situation myself,and the womanis not held accountable,unconstitutional,unfair,I’m human,humans,make errors,another way government makes money.

Comment on Starry Night and Raspberries by grandma

grandma — Fri, 31 Oct 2008 18:59:44 +0000

really intense - kept my interest but kinda morbid - too much description of Wren but you really have a knack with words - not a plesant end

Comment on Humpty Frickin Dumpty by grandma

grandma — Fri, 31 Oct 2008 18:48:18 +0000

Is this a true story - hmmm

Comment on Charles Hemingway von Liechtenstein by grandma

grandma — Fri, 31 Oct 2008 18:43:41 +0000

aaron - glad you’ve started thinking of writing again . This bit was funny but really didn’t make alot of sense - except show what not to say or do at a job interview. Loveya.

Comment on Pro-Choice – What about men? by grandma

grandma — Fri, 31 Oct 2008 18:34:18 +0000

Very good arguments, but you left out the rights of the unborn - they cannot speak and I consider them a life even though they havent arrived in our world i do agree strongly that the man should be considered in this decision as it is part of them that the woman is destroying . As you know I am against abortion and think the government should not be involved.

Comment on Slow Motion by PirateNinja

PirateNinja — Wed, 27 Feb 2008 13:21:44 +0000

AWESOME!

Comment on Thorns by Aaron Ganschow

Aaron Ganschow — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 23:22:42 +0000

This story was originally written with a 300 word limit for my first creative writing class. I based it off of an opening line I had created earlier in the class. It was originally written in classing present tense without any interaction with his love. It was a story with internal struggle. I chose to re-write it later and place it in present tense and expand it a bit. It lost a lot of its original glory through the transition and I would like to take the time to revise it in the future. It is a very immature piece in terms of my writing development and I display it for the simple fact that I need to remember to re-do it!